Hannah's Story: Vampire Love Never Dies - Giulietta Maria Spudich

This was rather short, 140 pages. There isn't any smut or gore in this one. I was really hoping to enjoy this more than I did.

 

The writing feels choppy, the dialogue is under developed and feels lacking, and so many sentences have the same words...

 

For the next two weeks...

 

and...

 

The next week...

 

This felt like a first draft that needs tweaked. There aren't too many clean vampire romances. Again, I really wanted this to be great. I may even be too forgiving with my rating.

 

I won this in a contest somewhere on the internet.