This one has so much potential. I haven't finished it, and I probably won't. It needs a rewrite. Word choices seem wrong, punctuation mistakes (more like commas need to be used instead of so many short sentences), missing words, etc. With the finishing touches done I would really like it. It's funny, cute, fluffy, and I love the main character, but I can't get past the flaws.
DNF for now. If this ever gets reworked, I will definitely give it another shot. No rating because I can't force my self to rate such a cute story low, but I also can't give it a good rating the way it sits.